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Dinner is still being digested in Tani’s stomach as her and her family drive down Main Street towards their home. It’s the day before her birthday and she’s excited because ...

The words echo in my mind the rest of the day. I slowly tap a number two pencil on the wooden desk, watching my fingers hold the wooden writing utensil ...

“Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up as fast as I could. It didn’t work. The sweltering heat from ...

Hi Nepo!! I'm Dianne and I'll be your reviewer today. How exciting! ‘Huh, where am I?’ I thought, looking around my surroundings. This starts off wrong because when a person ...

A/N: Short story practice. Tell me what you think. :) I’m bleeding. I look down at my hand and see the red streaks of already drying blood I wiped from ...

Hey Jackle, I'm back. Um, let me see... This post has a problem that you usually have in other posts of this story. Basically, you're rushing through the story again. ...

Whoa, I honestly did not expect to get three reviews in one day. Aside from that, thank you Dreamy115, I totally understand what you mean with the big words and ...

Lace your fingers through mine, Pass to me your warmth and protect me. A glacial storm; a wailing cry From inside me leaving no air to breathe. Falling into this ...

Hey jackle!! Sorry it took me so long to get to this, life is uber busy at the moment. Anyway, on to the review!! Okay, first, I'm going to go ...

Part Three “Why are they burning my picture?” she asks, a cold sweat breaking out on her forehead. The boy looks away from her and paces back and forth in ...

Well, jackle, you really have an active imagination. To be honest, I loved this piece and I think it's the best one you've written. The first line caught my attention ...

Well thank you Esme! I'll change it soon so it's more aesthetically pleasing instead of repitive. And thank you for pointing out that I was telling it rather than showing ...

Thank you, Karma!! I noticed that today when I was re-reading it and I totally freaked out. But thank you for pointing that out!! It's weird that nobody else noticed ...

Hey jackle!! Here I am, just as promised!! So let me start by saying that this was very interesting and the events really are helping moving the story along, which ...

Part Two He constantly turns around to see if the girl is still following him. She seems lost in her own world as they make their way across the dark ...